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    Here's something that I've been sitting on for a little while. I hope you enjoy it. More chapters will come eventually, so please be patient.

    Prologue

    I knew it was coming. After all the damage humankind has done, how could anyone not? Pollution, poaching, deforestation.
    I knew Earth was dying, that its death was inevitable. What I didn’t know was when, or how. I was surprised as everyone else, when the first ship appeared.

    Chapter One

    My quiver was empty again. All twenty-four arrows were embedded in the four targets facing me, each as close to the center as the other allowed. I smiled in satisfaction and walked over to retrieve them.
    I came by the archery range as often as school and parents allowed. While most people drooled over guns and tanks and the like, I preferred the more medieval weapons. The bow itself had a special place in my heart. The one I carried was plain by normal standards, but it was must more powerful than the earlier models. I smiled at it now, black with its red accents. Through it, I had gained strength and a private place to think.
    I returned my arrows to my quiver and resumed my position. I faced the targets and slowly raised my bow. I held the pose for a minute. Then I darted my hand for an arrow, knocked it, drew and fire. As soon as I let go, I grabbed another arrow, swiveled to a different target, and let fly.
    Within five minutes, my quiver was empty yet again. All the arrows were in their targets. I smiled in satisfaction, then jumped as I heard clapping. I whirled around, then smiled as I saw Silver leaning against the canopy pole and clapping. He smiled back at me. “Another excellent set,” he said.
    I shrugged. “It was alright. I can do better.”
    “Better?” he gestured at all the arrows. “How can you get better than spot on like that?”
    “By doing it from more difficult positions,” I answered. “Crouching, from behind a tree, maybe even coming out of a roll.”
    “You watch too many movies,” he teased. I laughed, then ran to fetch my arrows. Then I ran back and pecked him on the cheek. “Thanks for coming to pick me up, Silvs.”
    “No problem, Duckitty.” I grinned at the nickname. My name is Sarah, but I often called myself Cat on computer games. The “duck” part comes from a song I often annoyed Silver with. I hummed it now as he lead me to his silver Jeep Wrangler. He gave me a world-weary smile. “One of these days that song is going to get old.”
    “One of these days,” I agreed. “But not today.” I climbed in and buckled my seatbelt as Silver went around. Soon we were heading down the road. I turned to Silver then, my face dead serious. “Silvs, I have to pack my bags.”
    He glanced at me briefly, then returned his attention to the road, his brown eyes suddenly worried. “Why?”
    I grinned. “Because my parents said we could go.”
    He grinned also. “Alright!” He tossed me his phone, knowing I never carry mine. “Text the gang. I think they’ve been looking forward to going to that lake house as much as you’ve been wanting to take us.” I immediately set to work sending the good news to my crew. The trio weren’t long in replying and we quickly hammered out all the details. I sighed and leaned back in my seat, happy in my little corner of the universe, not knowing how short-lived that happiness was going to be.
    Phillipians 4:13 - I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

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  • #2
    All of my hearts <33
    Good job with the natural flowing dialogue, I look forward to seeing the others introduced

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    • #3
      I get a little descriptive in this chapter. Please let me know if it's too much, so I know to tone it down when I do similair scenes later.

      Chapter Two

      When my grandparents passed away, they left their lake-side cabin to my mother. Some weekends, she and my father go there to relax. I sometimes go too, but I prefer having the house to myself.
      However, to celebrate the start of summer, I was able to secure the cabin for me and my friends. I wanted to be there early to make beds clean house and stock the fridge, so I managed to convince Silver to pick me up early. The others would follow along later. After all, we couldn’t all fit in Silver’s Jeep.
      The ride over was uneventful, quiet but for the radio and me telling Silver where to turn. Knowing him, he probably looked up directions last week and committed them to memory, but he listened to me anyways. Sometimes, that wasn’t a good thing. It had been a while since I had gone to the cabin so occasionally, I missed the turn we were supposed to take. When that happened, Silver would smile at my profanity and loop around to get us back on track.
      I rolled the window down as the lake came into view. I smiled as the cool wind ruffled my golden-blonde hair. I undid the ponytail tie and let it fall down to my shoulders. I grinned at Silver, whose short black hair was also being ruffled. “Almost there.”
      He smiled. “Any more turns you plan on missing?”
      “Nope,” I said cheerfully. Just as we passed the next turn. Silver laughed as I started muttering about him distracting me and did a U-turn.

      When we finally pulled up, Silver followed me as I unlocked the door and entered. The cabin wasn’t large, but it wasn’t too small either. The front door lead into the living room, where a dark brown sofa sat in front of an entertainment center. A TV, DVD player, Wii, and PS3 were sitting on it, while an assortment of games and movies were in alphabetical order (yes, I’m OCD) on the bookshelf next to it. A couple armchairs sat on opposite ends of the mahogany coffee table in between the sofa and entertainment center.
      A door to the right of the TV lead to a bathroom, while two on the opposite wall lead to the two bedrooms. One had a Queen-sized bed and its own bathroom, while the other had a bunk bed and an old computer. Towards the back of the living room was the kitchen and eating area. Six chairs surrounded a cherry wood table. The fridge hummed quietly next to the back door. A stove and microwave sat on the opposite side of the counter, closer to the dining area.
      I wrinkled my nose as we walked in. “Musty in here. Go open some windows, will you? I’ll see if I can find where Mom hid the bedding.”
      I found sheets and blankets in the dresser of the master bedroom and set to work making up the three beds, after which I went into the living to find Silver laying down on the couch, eyes closed and head pillowed in his hands. I plopped down on one of the chairs and Silver cracked open an eye. “Care to do any work?” I asked.
      Silver closed his eye again. “No use asking me, I’m sound asleep.”
      I laughed. “Well, if Silvs is sound asleep,” I said in a stage whisper to an imaginary audience, “then he won’t mind if I steal his Jeep and run to the store.” I reached for his keys, which were on the coffee table.
      Silver snatched them first. “You drive like a lunatic. I’m not letting you drive!”
      I grinned. “Alright, you go while I dust.” I handed him a list and a handful of bills. “If you think we need more of anything, go ahead and get it, but please don’t go overboard.”
      “Of course not.” Silver grinned. He kissed my cheek. “See you in a bit.” And he left.
      I moved around the house, dusting, cleaning the bathrooms, making sure the movies and games were still alphabetized. I just finished resorting the Wii games when I heard a car pull up. I hurried outside and smiled at my three friends climbing out of the F150. “Hey, Wolf, Serly. Dinner.” I grinned.
      “Please stop calling me that,” Angus said as he slammed the driver-side door closed. His name is Angus Blue Johnson, and makes me think of Angus steak and blu cheese. Hense the name.
      Gerrard Falcon is Serbly, a kind of falcon, while Ava Kami is Wolf, both for her handle and her attitude. That girl never backs down.
      “Come on in, everyone,” I said helping with suitcases.
      “Hey Sarah,” Ava called after everything was in. “There’s only three beds.”
      “I know,” I said, answering her question before she managed to voice it. “I figured you and I could share the Queen-sized one. Serbly can sleep on the top bunk, since he’s young and spry, while Dinner and Silvs fight between the couch and bottom bunk.”
      “Sounds good,” Gerrard said, just as Silver pulled up. We helped carry everything in, then put on bathing suits and headed to the lake for a swim. Although we had no clue, it was to be our last one.
      Phillipians 4:13 - I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

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      • #4
        Dinner will totally get the bottom bunk, because people love food more than they love colors D8
        It's looking good so far, Miss Chief. Keep it up

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        • #5
          Actually, Mr.Borgon, I happened to be doing my daily reading of the scientific journal titled Your Face and the research concluded that colors were more valued and thus this Silver fellow should get first chance at bottom bunk because, and I quote,
          Originally posted by Scientific Journal of Your Face Inquiry
          bottom bunks are totally like caves and you can do awesome stuff in them like pretending you're in a cave. Or partake in the art of kicking the person above you because you're a jerk.
          *sips tea* Quite.

          Nah, it didn't seem like too much description. You gave a good lay of the land, not too much, not too little. So good job so far!

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          • #6
            Thanks, you two. And I was thinking the two would take turns on the bottom bunk, starting with Angus, because Silver was going to make his world-famous muffins and he doesn't want to wake the others up right away.
            Phillipians 4:13 - I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

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            • #7
              First, question : Is the cast limited to your zombie group?

              Second, good story(even if I won't make an appearance in it D: ). Keep up the good work.
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              • #8
                No it's not, although any new characters won't come in until after I bring about the actual apacolypse. If you want to send in an app, I need name, age, appearance, personality (optional), and skill set.
                Phillipians 4:13 - I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

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                • #9
                  You're accepting characters? And there's zombies? Mind using Keiran from plagued? It's fine if you say no.

                  Name: Keiran


                  Age: 19

                  Appearance: Despite the apocalypse, Keiran still takes efforts to look good, wearing a black coat with "It's the end of the world and I feel fine" written on the back, almost new jeans, and a T-shirt with a cartoon zombie coming out of a grave. Mostly hidden by the coat is a gauntlet he stole from a suit of armor, which he swears makes it easier to punch stuff, but really just looks cool. He carries ammo in a messenger bag marked 'bag of holding', along with a pistol. A thin scar runs down to his cheek from his black shoulder length hair.

                  Personality: Keiran's adventurous, ditching his life and taking a new name, while he refuses to say what his old one was. He also has few moral qualms in raiding, taking what he needs.

                  Back story: When the aliens first attacked, he stole a Ferrari, a pair of pistols, and left, planning to hit the beach at the end of the world. After the zombies worsened, he started raiding abandoned shops and homes, deciding that he was living the good life

                  Skills: Mechanics, knife wielding and throwing, being awesome, et cetera.

                  Seriously, kick him out if you want.

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                  • #10
                    Sure, I can use him. I'd prefer if you PMed the apps to me, though, please.

                    And it's not zombies. That was my original plan, yes, but I changed my mind. Aliens instead. If you want to make an alien character who will help my humans, PM me and I'll give you a description so you can figure out how you want to work it.
                    Phillipians 4:13 - I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

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                    • #11
                      Sorry about that, and that I didn't know about the aliens. I think I'll opt out of making a character, then. Can't wait for updates.

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